Post by Annie on Jun 28, 2005 18:40:06 GMT 3
Beyond Eden
Fanfiction by Adilah
Chapter one: Just A Little Crush
“ I don’t know why you’re so nervous,” Mailys said to Sabrina. Well maybe cause I’ll be attending a party hosted by the ever-gorgeous Marat Safin, Bree thought to herself. Mailys continued talking about the up coming party. Bree looked over at the other occupants of the limo, Suse looked at ease, Roisin looked excited and was chatting away with Mailys.
“ Why are you nervous? It’s not like anyone can see you, I mean it is a masquerade party.” Suse asked Bree, who blushed. “ Its nothing, its just that I’ve always had a crush on Marat Safin” Bree whispered. At that statement Suse widen her eyes and giggled.
“ What’s going on here? Why are you laughing?” Roisin asked. Bree tried to shush Suse who was about to tell the other girls. “ Oh, this is just too cute” Suse exclaimed in delight. “ What is?” Mailys asked curious now. Suse was in a teasing mood tonight and Bree was her victim tonight. “ Lil Bree here has a crush,” She said like an excited pre-teen.
“ Who is it?” Roisin asked repeatedly. Roisin was tickling Bree hoping she’d confess. “ It’s nothing, I mean no one” Bree said in between tickle. “ Come on Suse tell us who it is so we can join in the teasing” Mailys said with a mischievous gleam in her eyes. “ Well lets just say he’ll be there,” Suse said.
“ Wow, that’s narrowing it down” Roisin said sarcastically. “ Yah no fair, since everyone will be wearing a mask until midnight that is” Mailys said happily. “ You all will have to wait and see then” Bree replied annoyed.
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Adjusting his suit, Marat was anxious for the party to start. He had invited his usual friends and most the Atp players. Smiling to himself he stood in his foyer awaiting his guests. “ This should be an interesting party,” he said to the empty foyer.
The first guest was his tennis friend Juan Carlos Ferrero dressed in a suit and a mask. “ You’re never late” Marat said and shook Juan Carlos’s hand. “ I don’t like being late.” He replied and Marat showed him to the living room. The doorbell rang and Marat excused himself.
After Juan Carlos’s arrival the guests came flowing. Marat played his part as the host to perfection. Smiling and chatted briefly to his guests in the foyer.
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“ Are you ready Bree?” Mailys teased. “ Do you want us to tell him you like him?” Roisin added. “ Stop it guys, She’s blushing. That’s a hint by the way.” Suse said. “ Very funny ha ha” Bree replied.
Marat was talking to a couple and when he saw the girls, he flashed them a smile. Bree’s heart skipped a beat. He slowly approached them and Suse sneaked a glance to Bree, who was breathing harshly. This is going to be a fun night, and Suse squeezed Bree’s hand to wake her from her dream.
“ Welcome ladies. So glad you could make it Mailys.” Marat said. “ How did you know it was me?” Mailys asked miserably, Marat laughed. “ Even with your mask in tact you’re beauty radiates” Marat replied. Mailys smiled and introduced her friends.
Susie had chestnut brown hair and very luscious lips. She looked very attractive with her smile. A very small smile, it just tugged her lush lips. “ It’s a pleasure to meet you,” she said. She has a very soft voice, Marat thought to himself.
What attracted Marat to Roisin was her alabaster skin, a complete contrast to her dark hair. Marat kissed her hand and she gave him a seductive smile. “ You’re very charming aren’t you” She said her voice filled with promises.
Sabrina on the other hand had wicked auburn hair and incredible green eyes. But she didn’t look wicked at all. She had a very fairy like beauty. Her hands were soft as he kissed them. “ How do you do?” he asked. “ Fine, thank you” she replied, her voice a whisper.
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“ You’re heart still beating?” Suse asked. Bree couldn’t help but smile. “ He is breath taking isn’t he?” She asked in glee. Susie laughed when she heard Bree. Hearing Bree laughed Roisin kept a look out.
“ Is it Andy Roddick? Lleyton Hewitt? Carlos Moya?” Rois asked. “ How can you tell who is who when everyone is masked?” Bree asked. “ I just do, so who is it?” Rois asked again. “ Who is what?” Amanda asked the girls. “ Bree’s crush” Suse answered. “ Oh really? Who is it?” Tracey asked. Tracey and Amanda are sisters who are also friends with Sabrina.
“ Stop it all of you” Bree said. “ You all came here to have fun and nail some tennis players, so go on now and leave me alone” She continued. The girls looked at Bree, “ well we aren’t the only ones hoping to nail a tennis player,” Susie said as she walked off.
“ So it is a tennis player” Roisin said and smiled before heading to the dance floor. “ Good luck” Amanda Said and headed towards Andy Roddick. “ Cheer up Bree, they were just teasing. Come on lets get a drink” Tracey supplied.
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As promised at the stroke of midnight all masks were to be off. Bree sneaked off to the balcony to take a breath of fresh air in order to sober her up and to avoid the eyes of her nosy friends. She sat down on a stone bench and looked out to the beauty sight of Monte Carlo. She could hear the people inside counting down. She just smiled at herself cause she could sworn she heard Roisin’s voice.
She was lost in the scenery and images of Marat. She didn’t realize someone was walking towards her. Marat sat next to her, Bree was very surprised and thought she conjured him up. “ It’s midnight mask off,” he said. “ oh, sorry” She said and took of her mask.
She looked like a shy fairy princess with her green eyes. And her chiffon dress looked like it was floating. She picked a great color ice blue, it complimented her hair and hair to perfection.
“ were you naughty as a child?” Marat asked, Bree was taken aback. “ Yes I was, but not anymore” She replied. He is officially drunk, Bree though to herself. “ Tell me a story about what naughty things you did” he requested.
“ Well when I was a child I tried to save the neighbors geese but my parents quickly lost patience.”
“ Why so” Marat asked.
In wide-eyed innocence, she explained, “ Because they couldn’t tolerate the goose drippings my nanny found in my room”
Marat roared with laughter, trying to imagine the scene as it must looked.
“ Father was infuriated” Bree expounded around her own mirth. “ My mother fainted and my nanny threatened to go to early retirement. It was so dramatic, with people yelling and geese honking”
“ And what happened to you?” Marat asked.
“ I was sent to my room to reflect on the ways of an unruly , disobedient child, and then to the library, where I had to write one letter to my nanny and one to my mother for scaring them as I did”
Shaking his head, he regarded Bree with smiling eyes. “ And did you learn anything from your lessons?”
“ yes”. She tucked her chin and gave him an audacious unrepentant look from under her lashes. “ the next time I try to bring the geese into the house I’ll put them in the attic where no one ever goes”
Laughter seized Marat again. He didn’t care that he was abandoning his guest. But he had duties and so he stood up to attend to the other guests. “ it was a pleasure&ldots;err..” he started.
“ Sabrina” Bree supplied. “ Right&ldots; wicked Sabrina” he said to himself. He smiled and left her on the balcony. But her smile still lingered in his mind and he constantly found himself searching for her in the crowd.
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“May we go now?” Bree asked sleepily. “ No way” the girls said. “ Hey, why don’t I drop you off. It’s on the way anyway and Amanda can follow the girls” Tracey suggested. “ oh great I’m tired” Bree said. After telling the girls both she and Tracey went to wait for their limo.
“ Leaving?” Marat asked, Bree turned to him and smiled. “ Yes, I am. I’m feeling very sleepy” She replied. “ No chance of going to an after party?” Marat inquired. Bree laughed. “ No there isn’t. it was a great party, oh there’s the limo now. Thank you again for the invite” She said.
“Thank you for a wonderful chat” Marat said to her before she entered the limo. Later that night as Marat lay himself to sleep, he dreamt about geese and cascading auburn hair.
Fanfiction by Adilah
Chapter one: Just A Little Crush
“ I don’t know why you’re so nervous,” Mailys said to Sabrina. Well maybe cause I’ll be attending a party hosted by the ever-gorgeous Marat Safin, Bree thought to herself. Mailys continued talking about the up coming party. Bree looked over at the other occupants of the limo, Suse looked at ease, Roisin looked excited and was chatting away with Mailys.
“ Why are you nervous? It’s not like anyone can see you, I mean it is a masquerade party.” Suse asked Bree, who blushed. “ Its nothing, its just that I’ve always had a crush on Marat Safin” Bree whispered. At that statement Suse widen her eyes and giggled.
“ What’s going on here? Why are you laughing?” Roisin asked. Bree tried to shush Suse who was about to tell the other girls. “ Oh, this is just too cute” Suse exclaimed in delight. “ What is?” Mailys asked curious now. Suse was in a teasing mood tonight and Bree was her victim tonight. “ Lil Bree here has a crush,” She said like an excited pre-teen.
“ Who is it?” Roisin asked repeatedly. Roisin was tickling Bree hoping she’d confess. “ It’s nothing, I mean no one” Bree said in between tickle. “ Come on Suse tell us who it is so we can join in the teasing” Mailys said with a mischievous gleam in her eyes. “ Well lets just say he’ll be there,” Suse said.
“ Wow, that’s narrowing it down” Roisin said sarcastically. “ Yah no fair, since everyone will be wearing a mask until midnight that is” Mailys said happily. “ You all will have to wait and see then” Bree replied annoyed.
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Adjusting his suit, Marat was anxious for the party to start. He had invited his usual friends and most the Atp players. Smiling to himself he stood in his foyer awaiting his guests. “ This should be an interesting party,” he said to the empty foyer.
The first guest was his tennis friend Juan Carlos Ferrero dressed in a suit and a mask. “ You’re never late” Marat said and shook Juan Carlos’s hand. “ I don’t like being late.” He replied and Marat showed him to the living room. The doorbell rang and Marat excused himself.
After Juan Carlos’s arrival the guests came flowing. Marat played his part as the host to perfection. Smiling and chatted briefly to his guests in the foyer.
# # # # # # # # # ## # # # #
“ Are you ready Bree?” Mailys teased. “ Do you want us to tell him you like him?” Roisin added. “ Stop it guys, She’s blushing. That’s a hint by the way.” Suse said. “ Very funny ha ha” Bree replied.
Marat was talking to a couple and when he saw the girls, he flashed them a smile. Bree’s heart skipped a beat. He slowly approached them and Suse sneaked a glance to Bree, who was breathing harshly. This is going to be a fun night, and Suse squeezed Bree’s hand to wake her from her dream.
“ Welcome ladies. So glad you could make it Mailys.” Marat said. “ How did you know it was me?” Mailys asked miserably, Marat laughed. “ Even with your mask in tact you’re beauty radiates” Marat replied. Mailys smiled and introduced her friends.
Susie had chestnut brown hair and very luscious lips. She looked very attractive with her smile. A very small smile, it just tugged her lush lips. “ It’s a pleasure to meet you,” she said. She has a very soft voice, Marat thought to himself.
What attracted Marat to Roisin was her alabaster skin, a complete contrast to her dark hair. Marat kissed her hand and she gave him a seductive smile. “ You’re very charming aren’t you” She said her voice filled with promises.
Sabrina on the other hand had wicked auburn hair and incredible green eyes. But she didn’t look wicked at all. She had a very fairy like beauty. Her hands were soft as he kissed them. “ How do you do?” he asked. “ Fine, thank you” she replied, her voice a whisper.
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“ You’re heart still beating?” Suse asked. Bree couldn’t help but smile. “ He is breath taking isn’t he?” She asked in glee. Susie laughed when she heard Bree. Hearing Bree laughed Roisin kept a look out.
“ Is it Andy Roddick? Lleyton Hewitt? Carlos Moya?” Rois asked. “ How can you tell who is who when everyone is masked?” Bree asked. “ I just do, so who is it?” Rois asked again. “ Who is what?” Amanda asked the girls. “ Bree’s crush” Suse answered. “ Oh really? Who is it?” Tracey asked. Tracey and Amanda are sisters who are also friends with Sabrina.
“ Stop it all of you” Bree said. “ You all came here to have fun and nail some tennis players, so go on now and leave me alone” She continued. The girls looked at Bree, “ well we aren’t the only ones hoping to nail a tennis player,” Susie said as she walked off.
“ So it is a tennis player” Roisin said and smiled before heading to the dance floor. “ Good luck” Amanda Said and headed towards Andy Roddick. “ Cheer up Bree, they were just teasing. Come on lets get a drink” Tracey supplied.
# # # # # # # # # ## # # # #
As promised at the stroke of midnight all masks were to be off. Bree sneaked off to the balcony to take a breath of fresh air in order to sober her up and to avoid the eyes of her nosy friends. She sat down on a stone bench and looked out to the beauty sight of Monte Carlo. She could hear the people inside counting down. She just smiled at herself cause she could sworn she heard Roisin’s voice.
She was lost in the scenery and images of Marat. She didn’t realize someone was walking towards her. Marat sat next to her, Bree was very surprised and thought she conjured him up. “ It’s midnight mask off,” he said. “ oh, sorry” She said and took of her mask.
She looked like a shy fairy princess with her green eyes. And her chiffon dress looked like it was floating. She picked a great color ice blue, it complimented her hair and hair to perfection.
“ were you naughty as a child?” Marat asked, Bree was taken aback. “ Yes I was, but not anymore” She replied. He is officially drunk, Bree though to herself. “ Tell me a story about what naughty things you did” he requested.
“ Well when I was a child I tried to save the neighbors geese but my parents quickly lost patience.”
“ Why so” Marat asked.
In wide-eyed innocence, she explained, “ Because they couldn’t tolerate the goose drippings my nanny found in my room”
Marat roared with laughter, trying to imagine the scene as it must looked.
“ Father was infuriated” Bree expounded around her own mirth. “ My mother fainted and my nanny threatened to go to early retirement. It was so dramatic, with people yelling and geese honking”
“ And what happened to you?” Marat asked.
“ I was sent to my room to reflect on the ways of an unruly , disobedient child, and then to the library, where I had to write one letter to my nanny and one to my mother for scaring them as I did”
Shaking his head, he regarded Bree with smiling eyes. “ And did you learn anything from your lessons?”
“ yes”. She tucked her chin and gave him an audacious unrepentant look from under her lashes. “ the next time I try to bring the geese into the house I’ll put them in the attic where no one ever goes”
Laughter seized Marat again. He didn’t care that he was abandoning his guest. But he had duties and so he stood up to attend to the other guests. “ it was a pleasure&ldots;err..” he started.
“ Sabrina” Bree supplied. “ Right&ldots; wicked Sabrina” he said to himself. He smiled and left her on the balcony. But her smile still lingered in his mind and he constantly found himself searching for her in the crowd.
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“May we go now?” Bree asked sleepily. “ No way” the girls said. “ Hey, why don’t I drop you off. It’s on the way anyway and Amanda can follow the girls” Tracey suggested. “ oh great I’m tired” Bree said. After telling the girls both she and Tracey went to wait for their limo.
“ Leaving?” Marat asked, Bree turned to him and smiled. “ Yes, I am. I’m feeling very sleepy” She replied. “ No chance of going to an after party?” Marat inquired. Bree laughed. “ No there isn’t. it was a great party, oh there’s the limo now. Thank you again for the invite” She said.
“Thank you for a wonderful chat” Marat said to her before she entered the limo. Later that night as Marat lay himself to sleep, he dreamt about geese and cascading auburn hair.
